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 #43943  by Kakashi.Archive
 
Ok peoples. I’m gunna start a whole new story, along side the Naruto story I have going on in the Writers corner… Now I cant release the whole overview of the story just yet. If all goes as planned ill have a little background information posted in a few days..

Now to the main reason I’ve made this post. I want to do something more with the clan. Now you don’t have to do this I’m not going to come to your house and twist your wrist to do it.

I will have a small form below for anyone that wishes to make a character for the book. You must follow the guidelines, there are a few rules you must read as well before you fill out the application as to the fact they pertain to the application.

Below is the application and then the rules plus a little extra information before the release of the background story. Below will also be a short overview of part of the book.
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[b][u]Application [/u][/b]

*Name: 

Nicknames: 

*Gender: 

*Main Power: 

Secondary Power: 

Weapons:

[b][u]Appearance [/u][/b]

Height: 

Build: 

Hair color and style: 

Eye color: 

Skin color: 

*Age appearance: 

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: 

[b][u]Personality[/u] [/b]

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): 

*Habits: 

Other Personality information: 

History:
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Ok as for the rules.

Number 1.. Your name can NOT be the same one as on the forums…. Period, no if ands or buts about it… Come up with something original, it can be Japanese, Chinese, Arabic, English. W/e you want, except for your KR name… (please don’t have Numbers and stuff like that in your name, and don’t use someone else’s forum name either :P)

As for the powers and secondary powers. Basically I’m allowing you to leave your mind… You can have the power of fire, earth, water, lighting, and all that good stuff. Theres all sorts of stuff past that, that you can use, as far as reincarnation, resurrection, talking to animals, shape shifting… Basically anything you want, however this doesn’t leave you the option on how powerful you are, you can NOT have anything that will make you an all mighty powerful being blah blah blah… You get the point.

Weapons.. You can be so open about this i could care less. you could have a gun that draws on the energy of your body and shots ppl.. you could have a big ass sword just about anything goes... Nothing like vehicles with a bunch of weapons, such as a Tank.. thats my only limit to that :P

Anything that has a * next to it means its mandatory to fill out, if you don’t then your application will be put on hold until you fell the need to fill it out. Again I’m not forcing you to do anything however if you want your character put in the story you need to follow this guideline (god so hard :P) But also keep in mind, that the stuff that doesn’t have * isn’t mandatory however I will be making stuff up to put into that category so unless you want to look like a gnome or something you better fill it out cause I will make your character look ridiculous. Lol :D

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Before I explain part of the story let me explain this, and if Phoenix or any other part of the council has an issue with this, I can easily switch it around and send PM’s of it to people.. There is going to be two of this story going in the Writers corner, one will be called Edited, and one will be called Mature Content… There is going to be gore (yay), semi violent language, and possible “nude” scenes in the story, this will be put in the Mature Content.. The Edited Version will be cleaned up completely and child friendly. Please don’t read the Mature Content one if your not up for that kind of stuff. Again if council has an issue with this, ill gladly do PM’s and send the mature version like that, or even make a website that I can do it on.. (would be nice if I didn’t have to do that :P)

Also seeing as the Edited version will be shorter, the Mature version wont be posted till AFTER the Edited one is posted. Seeing as its shorter… Duh :)

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Now a bit of background on the story…

This is more along the lines of England type of basis, seeing there is Ghouls, ghosts, Vampires, and all that goodie crap… But the main part of this story will be part to do with Devil Worshipers (which I am NOT) but basically idiot people that open portals around the world and let certain class demons out into the real world which torment and kill people. And the point of our characters is to kill them in any way possible, or run screaming like little girls ^^.

I will have the opening parts of the story’s posted by December 1st, by which time I wont be taking anymore applications at that point. So your need to get your apps posted BEFORE DECEMBER 1ST!

If you have any questions please leave them here don’t pm me.. My pm box is 1-2 posts from being full and everything is basically crap iv PM’ed myself and until I move it I don’t want to lose any of it @_@ lol

Thanks for reading!!

Kimimaro/Kakashi *twitch*




People who have signed up and have got there Applications approved:
Sarah
Hime
Wolf
Zabuza
Fazz
Senbou
Echo
Kane
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 #43958  by BadWolf
 
riiiiiiiight.....

 #43967  by NinjaSarah
 
Ooh sounds fun!

Application

*Name: Huro.

Nicknames: Wolfy and Angel.

*Gender: Female.

*Main Power: The abilities of a wolf (includes fangs, ears, tail, transforming into a white wolf n' junk).

Secondary Power: Flying (wings that can be folded n' junk).

Weapons: A katana and my claws.

Appearance

Height: 5' 3"

Build: Eh, average I guess.

Hair color and style: Brown, waist-length and straight.

Eye color: Ice blue.

Skin color: Pale.

*Age appearance: 16.

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: Black gloves, red halter top, crimson skirt, black boots that go up to the knees, front of hair covers the left eye, wolf fur is white, wearing a black choker with a heart in the middle, top is-- Aw screw it I'll just post a pic

Image
The gloves are supposed to be black, and yes, I drew it. Fur is white, as are the wings.

Personality

*Personality (Write at least two paragraphs): She's as sweet as an angel and she's very helpful and likes to make people laugh. She has a sarcastic and cheesy sense of humor and she knows how to cheer people up. She's also very tolerant of people. She's dorky and she likes to play innocent pranks on people.

She has a pretty 'short' temper when it comes to being called short. She'll get aggravated and annoyed if people play with her wolf ears or tail. She'll take a bullet for any of her friends or family (n' junk).

*Habits: Always saying sorry even if it's not her fault.

Other Personality information: Don't call her short or she'll bite yer head off

History: She grew up in a small village with a happy family. When she turned 12 her whole village and family was slaughtered by bandits and now goes on alone, traveling and flying around in her wolf form until she finds a good home to reside in. She refers to herself as a lone wolf.

Hope that's enough detail fer ya. XP
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 #43968  by Wolferion
 
Heh, I see I am not only one person around who loves wolves and would like to look as one ( Heh, gone so far that look on 1/3 as wolf in real life ). I'll surely apply to your awesome stories once I am back at home and get time after revising and homeworks!

 #43973  by Kakashi.Archive
 
I left out weapons.. oopsy.. added taht and a rule for it..

 #43985  by NinjaSarah
 
woohoo! High-five Wolferion! :D *high-fives*

and okies Kimi-kun, I'll edit my post

 #44008  by Kakashi.Archive
 
Fazz wrote:hey kak, i hope that my name is ok for this, =)

*Name: Farzin

Nicknames: Fazz/Zin

*Gender: Male

Rarely used power: turns into his lycan(werewolf) form, outa control

*Main Power: simple silver sword, when it is drawn it must draw blood, can store power of killed enimies

Secondary Power: fans and claws


Appearance

Height: 5 foot 10

Build: medium strong

Hair color and style: medium, scruffy

Eye color: white (like mine :D )

Skin color: tanned

*Age appearance: 16

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: one green line, from just abouve the right eye at the right, going down, over the eye untill its a little from the mouth

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): Half Vampire half lycan (werewolf). Appearance of a vampire, with lycan strength and elegant claws, when he gets angry, transforms into almost full lycan, and is out of control.

Cast out by his parents at age of 7 when hes vampireish side started, and he killed a boy in school in a fight, survived by himslef till 16, and doesnt trust others easily. he wears all black (black fabric trousers, and a black shirt), with green fingerless forearm gloves (start at elbow, and go down to fingers on hands)

*Habits: dont talk that much

Other Personality information: hard stare when people talk to him, making them a little uneasy,

if u need any more info/ect plz tell me, =)

 #44023  by Hime
 
Name: Xiao Hua

Nickname: Serenity

Gender: Female

Main power: illusions, genjsutsu, and poison

secondary power: puppet control

Weapon: a sword that can be used as a whip (the weapon that Ivy from SC)...also throwing knives and conceal weapons

appearence

height: 5'8

build: average

eye color: brown

skin color: yellow

features: she is always carries a lute. She has short hair. She likes to be in the forest most of the time. She always have some flowers on her head...sword on her waist. She often carries a backpack that is carrying vases of potion and poison in it.

Personality:
She loves the nature. She loves people. She is very friendly and cheerful. She likes mixing potions and poisons....so she sometimes gives off this nerdy vide to other people. A person who thinks scientific metods....that means she uses a lot of reason to solve cases. She loves star glancing.....people will most ly find her out in the open in a clear night sky. She commited to her studies in potion and poison. However, she loves the outdoors. She enjoys hiking and taking trips to far away countries......despite she is very good good with chemicals...she is very bad at cooking. People died or having their lives flash in front of their eyes after eating her food.

She tends to talk and lecture on and on and on.......

History

Serenity comes from a bloodline of poison masters and potion masters. Her father is a plants specialist and a doctor in bone setting while her mother is a potion and poison specialist. She has an older brother who left home to train. She is also looking after her little sister, An An. She learnt about plants from her father and potion mixing from her mother. Her greatest dream is to travel the world to study plants and potion mixing. She is trying to put togehter a book of plants and a travelling log. Since she has knowlegde in chemicals and potion....many people came to her for medicial treatment when they have hiking or climbing injuries. Alo, people came to her to nurse their plants. She made a living off that.
Despite her warm and cheerful personality, she often gets mad when people refuse to taste her cooking. But then she will be very depressed when she found out people are having health problems after tasting her cooking. At home, her young sister cooks. Aside from her cooking, she can laugh at any situation.
When she was little, she managed to save one of greatest swordsman in the world. The swordsmen ecovered and felt grateful to her. He then stayed and taught her everything he knew in swordskills to Serenity. She is known for her sword whip combination. With her trainning in illustion combine with her other skills, she can best a lot of good fighters and ninjas

 #44040  by Wolferion
 
Um could you wait some time 0_0' I am trying to draw you the way to look, but it's kind of difficult >.>

 #44041  by Kakashi.Archive
 
Why dont u just fill out the app and send me a pic later :P

makes things so much easer for me cause im not waiting ^^

 #44079  by Zabuza
 
Application

*Name: Nicodemus

Nicknames: Nick

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: invisibilty

Secondary Power: the Force, if i can have another then the power to summon zombies

Weapons: lighstaber, shurikens, zombies, and a katana

Appearance

Height: 6'1

Build: skinneh

Hair color and style:Image - actual pic of me so i guess u could use that

Eye color: gray

Skin color: white =P

*Age appearance: 23

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: black cape, black hood,black pants, black torso, red sash. Scar on the right cheek (face lol) and left eye

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): Nicodemus likes to stay in the shadows and avoid crowds. He doesnt say much but can get on peoples nerves. Loyal to his superiors. He can be extremely lazy , but he always loves some action/adventure :twisted:

*Habits: extreme laziness, being late, messing with his hair

Other Personality information: speaks softly and carries a big stick

History: Nick was born in Ireland. His parents left him at an orphanage at the age of 5. Later his life, by the grace of somebody they enrolled him into a phenominal university. After he graduated he joined a league of assassins. What will the future hold for him?

 #44165  by Wolferion
 
Application

*Name: Okami Seigi

Nicknames: Wolf

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: Various powers of beast inside of him.

Secondary Power: Immediate regeneration

Weapons: ( in pic down )

Appearance

Height: 6 feet 2 inches

Build: Average

Image

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): Is mostly quiet, but likes to talk when there's a good reason. High fighting spirit in fights, fights for justice and to protect people he cares about. Doesnt fear death.

*Habits: Carries his spear with him nonstop, is careless about himself.

Other Personality information: Likes to drink tea often.

History: He doesnt know his parents, hardly ever heard about them. Raised as free spirit in a farm of village family ( adapted ), in age of 7 started learning spear tricks. At age of 15 with a help of local master blacksmith made exceptional quality spear and armor, which he has still . At his current age of 18, he left the village wandering lands, getting known with new people and helps them fight the creatures of darkness.
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 #44169  by Kenshin
 
Application

*Name: Achilles

Nicknames: Achilles

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: Time Manipulation

Secondary Power: the power of Lightning

Weapons: a sword

Appearance

Height: 5ft 6

Build: medium

Hair color and style: brown with a redish tint

Eye color: browny/red

Skin color: white

*Age appearance: 17

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: small birthmark on my right arm of a red lightning streak

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): dont talk a lot, and only let the select ( very few) people know about my life, will protect my friends with my life without hesitation, smart and quick witted, logically thinks through all of my situations, well you get the idea

*Habits: have the habbit of avoiding unessecary fights

Other Personality information: N/A

History: history is unknown,

 #44175  by BadWolf
 
Application

*Name: Original: Remtun

Nicknames: New: Xentrum

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: Space Manipulation {Dimentional Rift}

Secondary Power: Speed

Weapons: Snake Tail Keyblade

Appearance

Height: 6'2"

Build: Medium to Muscular

Hair color and style: Black with grey highlights, spiked in the back, spiking in the front creates a crown look

Eye color: Turquiose

Skin color: Lightly Tanned

*Age appearance: Roughly 19

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: Has the Eye of Ra tatooed under his right eye. Baggy black pants with red highlights, a white muscle shirt with gold highlights.

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph):
Excentric and random at most times, hes a young man with quite an ego. He was the beginning of an experiment to create artificial beings, but was later scrapped due to lack of proper requirements.

*Habits: Appears to dance to a beat while fighting, using his movements in a graceful manner to deal average damage. He also tends to lose sight of his objective when a fight becomes fun {challenging}.

Other Personality information: He dislikes people that miss the obvious, as well as vegetables; and he enjoys confusing others.

History: He was 12 years old when an organization kidnapped him and forced him to be the first subject in a experiment called the Sin Project, where his body and heart were momentarily seperated to expose what the organization claimed was his spirit, in order to meld his heart together with his spirit while casting asside his body.
He was awake all throughout the 13 hours of pain and agony, but finnally it was a successful procedure, he had become what the organization dubbed as a Naughtriface; nonexsistant, but still being. While he remained in the room they experimented on him in, he saw in amazement as his cast aside body took on a life of it's own, attacking the doctors. It was quickly destroyed by a man who used wind to manipulate 6 spears.
Throughout the years after that, he was put through a tiring training schedule, his new body put to the limits, which much to his surprise, where extensive.

His weapon:
Image

power/ability:
Whip-lash and Teleport Chain-link
This keyblade allows the user to extend the blade and the handle guard and use them like a whip, this comes in handy for lengthening your reach. in addition, it allows you to open small portals at any 2 or more pionts and slash the extended blade through to come out of the other pionts, this comes in handy to catch your enemy off-balance.

Extended Version:
Image

and yus i realise its a knock-off of renji's sword ><
but mines kewler :P
finnaly broke down and did this, hope ur happy now kimeh-chan ><

 #44178  by Kakashi.Archive
 
heh :) i still need to work on the everything for december 1st which i havent started it, and i still need to make 4 base characters. @_@ lol

been kinda loopy :D

 #44181  by Zabuza
 
when it says age appearance it mean actual age of wat age we look like?

 #44188  by Kakashi.Archive
 
it can be either or its more age appearance like how old u look not exact.. but in stuff like personal info u can put your actual age... i was rushing when i drew that whole thing up so i missed a few bits of info that would have been nice to have in there lol.. Also as far as age... id like to put a limit on there of no more then 1000 so u could look 19 and really be 693 or something.

I figure the older you are the more dumb the books gunna be lol

 #44239  by Fazz
 
Wolferion wrote:Application

*Name: Okami Seigi

Nicknames: Wolf

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: Various powers of beast inside of him.

Secondary Power: Immediate regeneration

Weapons: ( in pic down )

Appearance

Height: 6 feet 2 inches

Build: Average

Image

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): Is mostly quiet, but likes to talk when there's a good reason. High fighting spirit in fights, fights for justice and to protect people he cares about. Doesnt fear death.

*Habits: Carries his spear with him nonstop, is careless about himself.

Other Personality information: Likes to drink tea often.

History: He doesnt know his parents, hardly ever heard about them. Raised as free spirit in a farm of village family ( adapted ), in age of 7 started learning spear tricks. At age of 15 with a help of local master blacksmith made exceptional quality spear and armor, which he has still . At his current age of 18, he left the village wandering lands, getting known with new people and helps them fight the creatures of darkness.
zhou yu, dynastry worrias 4-6, leader of army of liu bei (shu), strongest base starter hero, and 6th strongest full-leveled up hero. =) DW FTW!

 #44283  by echo
 
*Name:Skyler

Nicknames:--

*Gender:Male

*Main Power:Superior strength

Secondary Power:High endurance of pain

Weapons:Anything & Everything

Appearance

Height:5'9

Build:Athletic

Hair color and style:Dark brown/Black, medium/long, messy

Eye color:Blue

Skin color:White

*Age appearance:16~

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing:--

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph):A city kid who grew up alone on the streets. Never knew the true meaning of possession, extremely familiar with the meaning of value. The few friends he has are the friends he'd do anything for. Cherishes everything and anything, kindhearted, but also capable of being cold-blooded and demeaning with his unbelievably short temper. Always doing something and constantly thinking, open minded and expresses his opinion strongly. Tells it how it is, expects the same in return - is always honest. Takes things one step at a time and lives his life day-by-day.

*Habits:Jokes around, annoys people

Other Personality information:--

History:--

 #44319  by Kakashi.Archive
 
So i said i would have the story out the first of December... guess what its not ready :D

Sooooo i will have it set up and ready for next monday... this means that i will continue to take more characters and such until that date... If you want (this is for you sarah :)) u can make 2 characters if your bored enough.. ^^

 #44323  by BadWolf
 
why is i not on the approved list ><

 #44324  by Kakashi.Archive
 
gosh my little whiny baby :P

<3 u senbou

 #44331  by BadWolf
 
Kimimaro wrote:gosh my little whiny baby :P

<3 u senbou
K3U2 :]

 #44601  by Kakashi.Archive
 
Opening Credits of the book are posted for the Edited Version. There wasnt much im gunna do with the unedited just yet so i wont post yet.

http://www.knights-reborn.org/forum/vie ... php?t=3835

Im still taking applications, the more people i have for this the better... Anyone reading thsi can make a character! Its appreciated :)

If people want to make a second character by all means you can, dont go overboard and send me 100 new ones :P

First chapter will be out January 1st... You can find the chapter listings at the bottom of the first post in the thread...

 #44615  by Kane
 
Application

*Name: Kinop Ialok

Nicknames: Kinslayer

*Gender: Male

*Main Power: Regeneration

Secondary Power: Sharpshooter and weapons master

Weapons: Two custom automatic pistols self reloading voice activated different ammunitions.

Appearance

Height: 6' 5"

Build: Lithe and muscular

Hair color and style: Black with green highlights in same style as Vincent in my signature

Eye color: Black

Skin color: Tanned

*Age appearance: Late twenties.

Other distinguishing marks, features, clothing: Dragon tattoos down both arms and a black rose tattoo on his right hand. Wears loose fitting black robes to allow freedom of movement.

Personality

*Personality (Write at least 1 paragraph): A loner by choice with his own sense of justice rarely takes others ideas on board if they conflict with his personal goals. Trusts only himself and is completly self sufficient being able to survive alone in the most hostile of environments.

*Habits: Leaves a black rose on the corpse of his marks/targets.

Other Personality information: Cold, Logical, Dangerous, Intelligent and Wise

History: Bounty Hunter with a reputation for always getting his mark.