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Yoda's Haiku
PostPosted:Sun Mar 02, 2008 8:57 am
by jawfin
Help you I can, yes
Judge me by my size, do you?
Wars not make one great.
*Clears throat*
There once was a green dude from Dagobah
Who ...
-oh nevermind
PostPosted:Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:22 pm
by Darko
huh?
PostPosted:Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:41 pm
by Greed
XD what was that!!!???!!!
PostPosted:Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:04 pm
by Akimoto
hear, hear.
PostPosted:Sun Mar 02, 2008 8:31 pm
by jawfin
PostPosted:Mon Mar 03, 2008 5:16 am
by BadWolf
LOL!
nice!
PostPosted:Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:01 pm
by jawfin
*push*
As I get to know the KR crowd better, I'm seeing a lot of Japanese influences, particularly their art and culture.
So, I want to detail the points perhaps missed in my Haiku.
It is the traditional 5/7/5 syllable count; where the first line sets the scene, and the last is the conclusion. I’d like to think I hit the
kireji with the “do you?” in the second line.
Also, note that the entire dialog comes from Luke’s first encounter with Yoda on Dagobah.
Believe it on or not, I spent quite a few hours writing this. Hmm, perhaps I shouldn’t of minimalised it by following up with a limerick !
FYI:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
PostPosted:Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:48 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
i found it pretty cool
PostPosted:Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:00 pm
by Fazz
shud have told us 2 read it in a yoda voice, lol
PostPosted:Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:43 pm
by Eagle
very awesome =)
PostPosted:Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:43 pm
by Cross
How did you not know about haiku if you watched SW movies?:X